雅思task1:The table below shows the percentage of men and women working in several sectors.Compare and contrast.
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本题属于数据比较多的表格图形，但是各部分信息分类非常明确。考生在处理此类题目时，需要确定恰当的写作层次，例如本题建议描述20年间男女百分比趋势的变化，以及主体段内容的安排。此外，在写作数值筛选方面，只需突出重点数值即可，例如最高，最低和不变的数值。
The table illustrates how the proportion of male and female workers in four sectors changed between 1990 and 2010.
Referring to men, most of them (25%) worked in manufacturing industry in 1990 but the figure had decreased in the following twenty years, standing at only 10% in 2010. This downward trend was also seen in the rate of male employees in retail and shops, declining from 23% to 8%. On the contrary, there were more and more men finding jobs in tourism, and its percentage almost tripled over this period. In terms of health field, 9% of men were hired both in 1990 and 2000 with an increase of 1% in 2010.
Regarding to women, 23% of them undertook the work related to tourism at the beginning of this period and in next twenty years its percent stabilised at 25%. The similar situation occurred in the figure for retail and shops where 13% of women worked in per ten years. However, meanwhile, the percentage of female staffs in health and manufacturing both had dropped.
Overall, it can be seen that compared with men, more women chose to work in tourism and health industry in the 20-year period.
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