手机的好处。
手机的弊端。
我的看法。
范文：
Nowadays, with the rapid development of IT,cell phones play a more and more important role in people’s life.But,like everything else,they have both favorable and unfavorable aspects.
First,it’s useful.As a wireless mobile telephone,it’s easy and handy to carry it wherever one goes and call the callee however far away he is.Therefore,it greatly facilitates people’s life. Second, it’s convenient.Whenever one meets trouble or something urgent, one can make a call immediately.Most important of all,it’s a very helpful companion. With a multifunction cell phone in hand,one can easily get on the net, browsing the useful information, conducting e-commerce and doing whatever one can do via Internet.
However,just as everything has two sides,the cell phone also has many disadvantages,.To begin with, it’s expensive to buy and costly to pay the bills, esp.that of global service. To make matter worse, it’s also easy to lose and costly to get it repaired. Worst of all, it’s not as clear as a family telephone and sometimes the number dialed is often not available.Last but not least,it’s alleged the micro-waves in it might do harm to people’s health.
In my opinion, with its expenses greatly reduced after China’s entry into the WTO,.Someday most of them will be developed into new Internet-enabled mobile phones, which will be as useful as pocket computers. And I believe its advantages will not only offset its disadvantages, but also far outweigh them.
范文赏析：
这是篇议论文，文章开篇入题，一步到位。先由手机的重要性直接引入议题，手机虽在人们生活中越来越重要，但也是利弊掺半，并以此承上启下，自然过渡。
接着在第二段文章论述了手机的益处：方便、快捷、便于携带，可以用它上网等等。随后，作者用“世上任何事物都是一分为二的”完成段落的过渡，进而引出手机的弊端，如自身价格昂贵、费用难以承受、易于丢失、有时因音量过小不清楚等等。
最后，权衡利弊，通过“In my opinion”作者亮出自己的观点：随着中国入世手机费用的下降，“利”会远远超过“弊“，且手机未来的趋势会向掌上电脑型发展。
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